Make more..
I read the review below me, and it is quite in depth and is quite constructive in some areas, but beyond that, I think you are an amazing artist and have a knack for making decent stories. Please, do make more. I'd really like to see this fleshed out!
Side note, make the next one's (because now you HAVE to make them!) longer? (Please? :D ) I might suggest also, if you did them like you did The Sagittarian 'Choose your own adventures' then it might immerse the viewers more. Thanks again, hope to see more from you soon!
5/5
9/10 <-(Because of the length. Lol sorry.)